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The death of Bachus (Free verse) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
To Zion young man.
Hold onto the strong urge
That dwells within your shattered gait
call's you home to finally purge
You walked with men that smoked your face
and battled tearing scabbing lace
for nothing but your mother's grace,
but she hangs dry flowered, an empty tank
by those same men
part of you, too.
Now just know,
I let you go
Half-New.
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Weighted score: 5.8333335
Overall Rank: 1613
Posted: March 18, 2003 3:05 AM PST; Last modified: March 18, 2003 3:05 AM PST
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