poemranker ::Dying In Silk (senryu) by scitz

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Dying In Silk (senryu)

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Jun 2003 · Edited 4 Jun 2003 · 3 comments

Black silk chokes me. Love spins the web of deceit, But I live to love.

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3 comments

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Jun-03/9:45 AM Reply
a bit short
[n/a] Islander 4-Jun-03/10:23 AM Reply
Courageous :)
[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-Jun-03/11:47 AM Reply
Enjoyable