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The 11th hour (Free verse) by INTRANSIT Godspeed gentlemen.
I pray the deeds expeditious,
that you stay within your threads
I pray that profanity
can be minimal
and your ideals not stray.
I pray
That you secure your enemy
and calm the tide.
And when all is said and done
you may return with pride.
Up the ladder:
Too Nearly Remembered
Down the ladder:
central line
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Posted: March 14, 2003 6:40 AM PST; Last modified: March 14, 2003 6:40 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11220 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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14-Mar-03/8:38 AM
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Whoa your pens smoking of late
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INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.7
> Caducus
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14-Mar-03/10:21 AM
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Thanks Caducus. I'm actually feeling rather flat lately.
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