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central line (Free verse) by kthulah is it wrong of me
to want to see the scars
retroactively share
your pain
nausea
fear
get to know death from
your perspective
like a mutual friend we both know
but from different times in her life
or an ex girlfriend
we both slept with
fucked to the wall
best we ever had
who dumped us both like trash
do you think it insane
for someone like me
to love someone like you
as if you have some
sort
of
monopoly on pain
Up the ladder:
The 11th hour
Down the ladder:
Someone
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Posted: March 24, 2003 11:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 24, 2003 1:47 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11226 Comments:
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OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3
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24-Mar-03/12:55 PM
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6. Everything after "monopoly on pain" just muddled it up.
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kthulah @ 80.230.35.215
> OneFingerAnswer
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24-Mar-03/1:48 PM
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I think you're right.
Yes.
(And also kinky)
Like, bathos and stuff, ewe, profound.
Bath house?
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