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central line (Free verse) by kthulah
is it wrong of me to want to see the scars retroactively share your pain nausea fear get to know death from your perspective like a mutual friend we both know but from different times in her life or an ex girlfriend we both slept with fucked to the wall best we ever had who dumped us both like trash do you think it insane for someone like me to love someone like you as if you have some sort of monopoly on pain

Up the ladder: The 11th hour
Down the ladder: Someone

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11221
Posted: March 24, 2003 11:14 AM PST; Last modified: March 24, 2003 1:47 PM PST
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[6] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 | 24-Mar-03/12:55 PM | Reply
6. Everything after "monopoly on pain" just muddled it up.
[n/a] kthulah @ 80.230.35.215 > OneFingerAnswer | 24-Mar-03/1:48 PM | Reply
I think you're right.
[0] Bobjim the II @ 217.40.231.55 | 24-Mar-03/1:59 PM | Reply
Yes.
(And also kinky)
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Mar-03/5:26 PM | Reply
Like, bathos and stuff, ewe, profound.
[6] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 > horus8 | 24-Mar-03/7:27 PM | Reply
Bath house?
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