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Someone (Free verse) by poetofthestar
She's every girl in the world Bleeding herself dry No one hears her as she pleads No one sees her as she cries Her words fall on deaf ears Her actions to blind eyes As she suffers blatant torment No one notices as she dies

Up the ladder: central line
Down the ladder: Smack Crack

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11222
Posted: April 5, 2003 10:10 AM PST; Last modified: April 5, 2003 10:44 AM PST
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