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Free verse № 48247

Smack Crack

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Apr 2003 · 2 comments

Maybe you rock around the clock maybe you dont i saw a girl at the 7 11 she laughed about something she shouldn't have there was a grain of sand hey mister if you're gonna walk on water make it good water i saw a play the other night something about einstein picasso and elvis and someones dog called HONDO it was a dog sort of a beagle mix trafficream

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[0] Blindproject217 28-Apr-03/11:08 PM Reply

This is the stupidest poem ive read all day. -0-

[7] horus8 28-Apr-03/11:30 PM Reply

if you seperated "traffic cream" you'd add more depth.