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The Best This Dream Can Offer (Lyric) by Deborah Carter Chances are i'll see you
in my dreams again tonight
things will be the same
as when we met
in my mind our love remains
and though we are apart
my heart just somehow
can't believe it yet
In my dreams I still have visions
of your smiling face
the life you gave
at the touch of fingertips
and though fate has intervened
and left my heart stone cold
with memory there is warmth
within your kiss
somehow each night
you come to me
upon a whispered prayer
the darkness shrouds my needs
of wanting more
for only in my dreams
will all the longings be fullfilled
in the arms of the man
that I adore
chances are I'll see you
in a place that's called somewhere
for between the hours
of darkness and the dawn
lying here beside you
is the best this dream can offer
for when the morning comes
you'll be gone
(c)Deborah Carter
Up the ladder:
Smack Crack
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Posted: May 24, 2003 7:59 PM PDT; Last modified: May 24, 2003 7:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7913947 Overall Rank: 11229 Comments:
I noticed this one is not arranged by Bill Murray...do you have another version or has this one not been edited as yet
cindy...this is actually the un-edited version(the original poem I wrote).Bill made a revision that I'm playing around with and when allowed to post again(you are only allowed to post three times in a week. am I correct?)I will post it again...guess I could have posted it along with this one huh...on the same page.
Welcome to Poemeranker. I am -=Dark_Angel=-, the naughty one. You will probably see me again at some point, mocking your tepid, clichéd poemes. Have a good time!
Haha, sorry... I try and see the best in poems but this one didn't seem to make me feel anything at all. I'll say this for you, you managed you be a little chiche, without diving off the deep end but your words fail to make any emotion conection to me. Not Bad, Not Good. Nothing really outstanding other than it doesn't strike me as either good writing or bad. Since I feel neutral to this poem -5-.
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