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The Best This Dream Can Offer (Lyric) by Deborah Carter

Chances are i'll see you in my dreams again tonight things will be the same as when we met in my mind our love remains and though we are apart my heart just somehow can't believe it yet In my dreams I still have visions of your smiling face the life you gave at the touch of fingertips and though fate has intervened and left my heart stone cold with memory there is warmth within your kiss somehow each night you come to me upon a whispered prayer the darkness shrouds my needs of wanting more for only in my dreams will all the longings be fullfilled in the arms of the man that I adore chances are I'll see you in a place that's called somewhere for between the hours of darkness and the dawn lying here beside you is the best this dream can offer for when the morning comes you'll be gone (c)Deborah Carter

Deborah Carter 25-May-03/7:11 AM
cindy...this is actually the un-edited version(the original poem I wrote).Bill made a revision that I'm playing around with and when allowed to post again(you are only allowed to post three times in a week. am I correct?)I will post it again...guess I could have posted it along with this one huh...on the same page.




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