poemranker ::20 most recent comments by INTRANSIT (301-320) and replies

Comments byINTRANSIT, 301–320 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Just Before My Shift Ends at The Uptowner by jessicazee 10 Oct 2005, 6:47 AM
whoda thunk just friendly needling could make a poem, ha!
on Just Before My Shift Ends at The Uptowner by jessicazee 10 Oct 2005, 6:46 AM
If I only knw gambling jargon.....
replying on Gnarly Knees by Dovina 9 Oct 2005, 6:26 AM
couldn't help it. sorry. :)
on Gnarly Knees by Dovina 9 Oct 2005, 6:14 AM
With knees like those, you will attract a handsome and rugged man and have many a great out-of-doors "adventures".
on Elmer's Last Try by Dovina 21 Sep 2005, 8:04 PM
Sad. Interesting swap there. Unlike me and my heavily cliched (and sedated) poems. I think I should like to try an inversion someday. How much does the safety equipment cost? Man, the rankers dead lately!
on Light by Quarton 21 Sep 2005, 9:20 AM
I'm reading an anthology right now: Staying alive (real poems for unreal times) By Neil Astley. I remember a poem that made mention of black holes or a black hole and your poetry came to mind. I cant seem to find the poem but the whole anthology is reeeeeely good.

Um, mamm-outh? and gladfly/glowfly? Planet-fly or moon-fly could be used? don't know. 8
on untitled Rubiyat 1 by starkfister 20 Sep 2005, 2:10 PM
well, at least you have a blog!

Moose.
replying on Seekers by Dovina 18 Sep 2005, 10:51 AM
Really? I thought they pre-selected trees to munch down that would spell -Crawl- when they were finished.
on Horus8 & The Werewolves Live... by horus8 18 Sep 2005, 10:46 AM
Bought your book! Went to freakin St Joseph MO to get it too. It was worth it to take the time to read instead of rushing through. My new fave? Wigging out!
Love it when justice gets served up hot from mattress dancing! I laughed so hard I had to put the book down.
When's the next one due?
on Stardust by TLRufener 6 Sep 2005, 10:07 AM
And 18345 which doesn't need work. these are good examples of relatively simple rhyme that can easily ratchet up a poem.
on Stop stalking me, eventually by T. Jonathron Remp 6 Sep 2005, 10:06 AM
I f t h e d a m n e d s t an z a s d i d n ' t a l l s a y t h e s a m e t h i n g . . . . . . . basically.
on Stardust by TLRufener 6 Sep 2005, 9:59 AM
Though it still needs some work, I think you should look at this. jsp id=102847.
replying on Watch where you're swingin' your dipthong, buddy by INTRANSIT 6 Sep 2005, 9:39 AM
AE! Thank you.
on Small-town Postal Clerk Considers Inspiration by zodiac 6 Sep 2005, 5:48 AM
HELP! Excelsior is wood shavings?! Can't be. Makes no sense. Dic.com left me cold. ??????? It is better as one whole piece.
replying on Dale by INTRANSIT 3 Sep 2005, 10:01 AM
I raise my paw and say: BAH!
on Cinder Mint Disaster Garden by MacFrantic 3 Sep 2005, 8:16 AM
I saw mental patients in a garden. I'm not kidding.
replying on The fight by INTRANSIT 3 Sep 2005, 6:56 AM
not naughty enough judging by the scores. ha!
replying on First Love by Dovina 3 Sep 2005, 6:55 AM
maybe that's what they mean by -too gay.
on The Scout by wilco 3 Sep 2005, 6:54 AM
-extraneous- good word but it bugs me beat-wise. Something about l-3 and l-4 in the first don't jive.
replying on First Love by Dovina 3 Sep 2005, 6:48 AM
no. i'm sure he got it. skipping is sooooo much more fun with wild arm flailing . you should try it!