| Re: a comment on Just Before My Shift Ends at The Uptowner by jessicazee |
10-Oct-05/6:47 AM |
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whoda thunk just friendly needling could make a poem, ha!
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| Re: Just Before My Shift Ends at The Uptowner by jessicazee |
10-Oct-05/6:46 AM |
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If I only knw gambling jargon.....
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| Re: a comment on Gnarly Knees by Dovina |
9-Oct-05/6:26 AM |
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couldn't help it. sorry. :)
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| Re: Gnarly Knees by Dovina |
9-Oct-05/6:14 AM |
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With knees like those, you will attract a handsome and rugged man and have many a great out-of-doors "adventures".
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| Re: Elmer's Last Try by Dovina |
21-Sep-05/8:04 PM |
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Sad. Interesting swap there. Unlike me and my heavily cliched (and sedated) poems. I think I should like to try an inversion someday. How much does the safety equipment cost? Man, the rankers dead lately!
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| Re: Light by Quarton |
21-Sep-05/9:20 AM |
I'm reading an anthology right now: Staying alive (real poems for unreal times) By Neil Astley. I remember a poem that made mention of black holes or a black hole and your poetry came to mind. I cant seem to find the poem but the whole anthology is reeeeeely good.
Um, mamm-outh? and gladfly/glowfly? Planet-fly or moon-fly could be used? don't know. 8
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| Re: untitled Rubiyat 1 by starkfister |
20-Sep-05/2:10 PM |
well, at least you have a blog!
Moose.
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| Re: a comment on Seekers by Dovina |
18-Sep-05/10:51 AM |
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Really? I thought they pre-selected trees to munch down that would spell -Crawl- when they were finished.
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| Re: Horus8 & The Werewolves Live... by horus8 |
18-Sep-05/10:46 AM |
Bought your book! Went to freakin St Joseph MO to get it too. It was worth it to take the time to read instead of rushing through. My new fave? Wigging out!
Love it when justice gets served up hot from mattress dancing! I laughed so hard I had to put the book down.
When's the next one due?
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| Re: Stardust by TLRufener |
6-Sep-05/10:07 AM |
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And 18345 which doesn't need work. these are good examples of relatively simple rhyme that can easily ratchet up a poem.
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| Re: Stop stalking me, eventually by T. Jonathron Remp |
6-Sep-05/10:06 AM |
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I f t h e d a m n e d s t an z a s d i d n ' t a l l s a y t h e s a m e t h i n g . . . . . . . basically.
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| Re: Stardust by TLRufener |
6-Sep-05/9:59 AM |
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Though it still needs some work, I think you should look at this. jsp id=102847.
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| Re: a comment on Watch where you're swingin' your dipthong, buddy by INTRANSIT |
6-Sep-05/9:39 AM |
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| Re: Small-town Postal Clerk Considers Inspiration by zodiac |
6-Sep-05/5:48 AM |
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HELP! Excelsior is wood shavings?! Can't be. Makes no sense. Dic.com left me cold. ??????? It is better as one whole piece.
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| Re: a comment on Dale by INTRANSIT |
3-Sep-05/10:01 AM |
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I raise my paw and say: BAH!
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| Re: Cinder Mint Disaster Garden by MacFrantic |
3-Sep-05/8:16 AM |
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I saw mental patients in a garden. I'm not kidding.
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| Re: a comment on The fight by INTRANSIT |
3-Sep-05/6:56 AM |
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not naughty enough judging by the scores. ha!
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| Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina |
3-Sep-05/6:55 AM |
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maybe that's what they mean by -too gay.
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| Re: The Scout by wilco |
3-Sep-05/6:54 AM |
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-extraneous- good word but it bugs me beat-wise. Something about l-3 and l-4 in the first don't jive.
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| Re: a comment on First Love by Dovina |
3-Sep-05/6:48 AM |
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no. i'm sure he got it. skipping is sooooo much more fun with wild arm flailing . you should try it!
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