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Watch where you're swingin' your dipthong, buddy (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
I hate you, Frank.
I hate you to the
ends of my chewed off fingernails.
The wealthy don't look down their
noses the way you do and you're only
as renewable as moonlight on my sheets
or Seattle.
I think you're canned food, Frank
and you lost your rollerskates in the hudson.
I think you're a man who ate a Kazoo and a Cello
and a mongrel lost in mutt-love.
You wear winter for hair , Frank, and your head
is filled with clinking swizzle sticks and you can talk
all the cross hatched green hillside you want
but it doesn't make everything wheel stud and lug-nut.
Go to hell , Frank
or go catch a bus.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2796
Posted: September 5, 2005 3:59 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2005 3:59 PM PDT
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