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Dale (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
What times we had !
You taught me darts
and the first time I played my dad
I beat him.
I worry about my dads age sometimes
it seems like a joke now.
We bowled !
game after game after game
then billiards with Dave.
I'm sure who we worked for
was a contributor.
Doing our laundry together,
god how we grew
when you said "fuck you"
I knew what you meant.
And we could move cars!
The whole Marijuana and Valerie
thing was just too funny!
Now I'm a newborn pup
that just lost its mother.
I just want to punch a grandfather clock!
Grab its arms, yank its guts out
through its face.
I could have come to Arkansas
and helped you with that thing
you had going on,
whatever it was.
I would have, gladly.
But I didn't know
you never called me again.
What's left but
Sade and
Courvosier white russians.
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Posted: September 3, 2005 8:13 AM PDT; Last modified: September 3, 2005 8:13 AM PDT
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