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Kill me (Free verse) by little_big_nose Kill me
Life is too short to waste
With all the semi-real
Looks on their face
Bury me
Six feet-deep, with care
Woulden't want anyone to find me
Life was way too fair
Miss me
Because you're all alone
Then hang yourself
With the cord on the telephone
Visit me
I didn't deserve to live on your Earth
Now I take you by the hand
To our new rebirth
Up the ladder:
sevenfourteenrobinson
Down the ladder:
The Dread
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Posted: January 9, 2004 7:21 PM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2004 7:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.4482355 Overall Rank: 2963 Comments:
You know whats scary? It made sense to me.. I like dark things too much ^^;; and i over analze things.
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I don't think i understood
"Bury me
Six feet-deep, with care
Woulden't want anyone to find me
Life was way too fair" ... um, maybe thats just me.
or
"I didn't deserve to live on your Earth" ? ... I thought life was fair?
all in all, I liked it... just those lines, above, got me confused...