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Kill me

Member since 2004 · Posted 9 Jan 2004 · 3 comments

Kill me Life is too short to waste With all the semi-real Looks on their face Bury me Six feet-deep, with care Woulden't want anyone to find me Life was way too fair Miss me Because you're all alone Then hang yourself With the cord on the telephone Visit me I didn't deserve to live on your Earth Now I take you by the hand To our new rebirth

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[7] Blindpoetry 9-Jan-04/7:52 PM Reply

hm... I'm not much of a "ranker" ... but I give it a seven...

I don't think i understood

"Bury me
Six feet-deep, with care
Woulden't want anyone to find me
Life was way too fair" ... um, maybe thats just me.

or
"I didn't deserve to live on your Earth" ? ... I thought life was fair?

all in all, I liked it... just those lines, above, got me confused...

[n/a] little_big_nose › Blindpoetry 9-Jan-04/7:58 PM Reply

You're totaly right, it doesn't make too much sense, but I didn't really mean for it to, thats just what was on my mind

[8] WithoutLife 9-Jan-04/8:36 PM Reply

You know whats scary? It made sense to me.. I like dark things too much ^^;; and i over analze things.