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Kill me (Free verse) by little_big_nose

Kill me Life is too short to waste With all the semi-real Looks on their face Bury me Six feet-deep, with care Woulden't want anyone to find me Life was way too fair Miss me Because you're all alone Then hang yourself With the cord on the telephone Visit me I didn't deserve to live on your Earth Now I take you by the hand To our new rebirth

Blindpoetry 9-Jan-04/7:52 PM
hm... I'm not much of a "ranker" ... but I give it a seven...

I don't think i understood

"Bury me
Six feet-deep, with care
Woulden't want anyone to find me
Life was way too fair" ... um, maybe thats just me.

or
"I didn't deserve to live on your Earth" ? ... I thought life was fair?

all in all, I liked it... just those lines, above, got me confused...




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