Blindpoetry9 Jan 2004
hm... I'm not much of a "ranker" ... but I give it a seven...
I don't think i understood
"Bury me
Six feet-deep, with care
Woulden't want anyone to find me
Life was way too fair" ... um, maybe thats just me.
or
"I didn't deserve to live on your Earth" ? ... I thought life was fair?
all in all, I liked it... just those lines, above, got me confused...