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caught amist (Villanelle) by LaasChijld
caught amist
I wondered of into the mist,
freezing in hale gives chill
cooled it down with a hiss.
walking circles in the abyss
Brought me down, tired until
I wondered off into the mist.
I flicked and gave it a twist,
Took a breath & stayed still
cooled it down with a hiss.
Loaded it up, put in my fist
Then against lips to fulfill,
I wondered off into the mist.
filled to the brim to assist,
A flick, with a hit to kill
cooled it down with a hiss.
Illness calls I cannot resist
A Kiss to momentarily to feel
I wondered off into the mist
cooled it down with a hiss.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2963
Posted: February 11, 2006 2:13 PM PST; Last modified: February 11, 2006 11:43 PM PST
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