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To Who Ever Wrote That Roller Coaster Poem... (Free verse) by Fear of Garbage You wanted to go up but I only go down.
What was that you said
About my bloody mouth?
You're not responsible for it.
"Build it up.
Take a ride on it.
I'm not responsible if you come out
With a broken nose or bloody mouth."
Up the ladder:
... in the Rain
Down the ladder:
forever it was you
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Posted: May 6, 2004 11:04 AM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2004 11:04 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.4482355 Overall Rank: 2960 Comments:
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deleted user @ 68.66.196.168
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6-May-04/12:12 PM
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Maybe it was "Loser" by Dan garcia-Black.
One third rediculous, one sixth pointless, and half-vivid.
You have therefore earned yourself a -7-
You know, you really should write something good yourself before you go around making smart ass comments on peoples' poems.
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