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Stop stalking me, eventually (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
Stop following my car Stop kidnapping my pet Stop watching me from afar But not quite just yet You watch me like a show You treat me like shit But I'll let you know When I want you to quit You follow me from work And when I jog in the park My friends say you're a jerk But just wait for my mark You sneak up like a sleuth Without making a sound But the God's honest truth Is that I like you around You strap me in tight To your torture invention You cost me my life But at least you pay me attention

Up the ladder: Lonely
Down the ladder: I Need Not be Told

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12327
Posted: September 6, 2005 10:00 AM PDT; Last modified: September 6, 2005 10:00 AM PDT
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[4] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.100.67 | 6-Sep-05/10:06 AM | Reply
I f t h e d a m n e d s t an z a s d i d n ' t a l l s a y t h e s a m e t h i n g . . . . . . . basically.
[2] wilco @ 66.61.101.130 | 7-Sep-05/7:02 PM | Reply
This is what Dr. Seuss would've written had he been mentally retarded.

Seriously...this is just horrible. You're capable of better, I know...
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.89.186 > wilco | 7-Sep-05/7:18 PM | Reply
hahahhha
[2] Tintagiles @ 142.166.234.130 | 7-Sep-05/7:41 PM | Reply
'Stop kidnapping my pet'... Wonderful. How often has the stalker done so? Does the pet just keep reappearing on the doorstep or something?
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp @ 128.252.229.185 > Tintagiles | 8-Sep-05/10:47 AM | Reply
he took my panda
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