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Fancy (Free verse) by reanna
(starring Bertolt Brecht, George Harrison, and Warren Zevon) And I can't wait to get to - well, who cares - as long as it's only Bertolt and me. I float over to you you're naked, seated on a puffy ivory-coloured cloud. . . . . . um. . . I grin, grin, grin I oscilate my head to the right there's George? wearing only a leaf, his guitar, and uh pair of sunglasses; singin': "I got my mind set on you. I got my mind set on you . . ." I quickly oscilate back to the left sure enough It's the Zevon: Black 3 piece suit with the chest open. As usual. Animalistic face that screams: I'm gonna nibble on yo'r titty! I m a k e a d a s h - f o r i t - - - my n a k e d shrieking body giggles: Y o U can't g e t m E as I fall up into morning i hear the swallows titter before my eyes open

Up the ladder: Valentine?
Down the ladder: fly me away

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12336
Posted: July 4, 2004 2:18 PM PDT; Last modified: July 4, 2004 2:18 PM PDT
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[5] ?-Dave_Mysterious-? @ 80.42.79.187 | 4-Jul-04/2:34 PM | Reply
This poem is utterly unintelligible - the unmistakable hallmark of excellent poetry!!!!1
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