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Lonely (Free verse) by the_unknown_angel83
I am so lonely. Why doesn't anybody wan't me? Is it my looks? What is it about me that makes you not want me? All I do is cry. I feel unloved. I don't feel wanted. Why am I so lonely? Is anybody out there? Help me, please. I didn't mean to hurt you if i did. I only want to have a friend. I am all alone. Everybody left me. Who do I turn to for my problems? Please, tell me what I did wrong? Is anybody out there? Im so lonely.

Up the ladder: Ram
Down the ladder: 40 ozs to the factory

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12331
Posted: September 25, 2003 8:08 PM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 8:08 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 25-Sep-03/8:18 PM | Reply
Yes, I think it is your looks. But you're a lovely lass otherwise.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 25-Sep-03/11:59 PM | Reply
Here's the club for you! http://www.vampirefreaks.com/pics/girls01.shtml
[6] crwncka1 @ 67.30.49.212 | 26-Sep-03/7:35 AM | Reply
I feel this person... loneliness is acutally a real test of human stregth and sprit... you feel it once then it says... :/
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