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Cinder Mint Disaster Garden (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Alice stripes her hair with bows
Her shallow dimples hide her woes
A scar runs 'cross from ear to ear
She hesitates and shakes with fear
Happiness is all she lacks
For there's no place to get it back
A cinder mint disaster garden
Smells so sweet
And in the heat
We may lay
Where she will seldom stay
Gordon wells his fury down
It dances hate upon his crown
What often makes oft makes his anger
Swells it up to mortal danger
All the night he sleeps in bed
Wrings his hands and dreams of red
A cinder mint disaster garden
Turns the air
To ripe despair
And we philosophize
Where he so scarcely flies
Elby Jean just pays her dues
Mutters prayers in greys and blues
When she works the job gets done
Her hands a product of the sun
She takes some solace in her strife
This laboring consumes her life
A cinder mint disaster garden
Grows so loud
So strong and proud
While we languish 'round
Where she has blessed the ground
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.5
Weighted score: 5.1659904
Overall Rank: 5080
Posted: December 7, 2004 12:00 PM PST; Last modified: September 2, 2005 8:15 PM PDT
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