poemranker ::ode to boa:w/thanks to the 60's rock group, BloodRock by malpaso

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ode to boa:w/thanks to the 60's rock group, BloodRock

Member since 2007 · Posted 14 Nov 2007 · 2 comments

i feel the plastic slowly melting pain is flowing all through my back pocket i think that i have plastic poison the hope i knew has such a distant stare i remember we were flying low and hit something in the air i remember i had to call their automated system and the array of services while i was on hold were presented in a way which put me in awe it's good to be loved and stroked finance charges clear up to my transverse colon...iremember

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[n/a] malpaso 16-Nov-07/4:10 AM Reply
no but I wish there had been
[8] Kamikaze 30-Jun-08/3:17 PM Reply
A dirge for modern life. This guy is nuts. I actually remember the song he's riffing on.