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Him (Free verse) by hobojo
The excitement from unknown The rush from laughter and smiles And what a smile Addiction to sparkling brown eyes And to a human so knowing With wit and kindness In perfect sweet balance The uncertainty leaves me wanting And I feel breathless And desiring more and more Attention Interaction Just even thinking Of him

Up the ladder: Sim Saladin
Down the ladder: welcome home

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.5
Weighted score: 5.1659904
Overall Rank: 5074
Posted: January 22, 2008 5:40 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2008 5:40 PM PST
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[8] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 87.84.68.242 | 23-Jan-08/11:15 AM | Reply
An aged wipe is but a paltry thing,
A tattered rag upon a stick, unless
Buttocks sally forth and cling, and bravely cling
To every blemmish on its scrunched up mess,
Nor is there parping school but studying
Monuments of its own brownificence;
And therefore I have sailed the seas and come
To the holy city of Brownium.

From "Sailing to Brownium" by William Butler Yeats
[9] Dovina @ 75.82.69.253 | 23-Jan-08/2:03 PM | Reply
Can you introduce us? I want to meet him.
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