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Him (Free verse) by hobojo
The excitement from unknown
The rush from laughter and smiles
And what a smile
Addiction to sparkling brown eyes
And to a human so knowing
With wit and kindness
In perfect sweet balance
The uncertainty leaves me wanting
And I feel breathless
And desiring more and more
Attention
Interaction
Just even thinking
Of him
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.5
Weighted score: 5.1659904
Overall Rank: 5078
Posted: January 22, 2008 5:40 PM PST; Last modified: January 22, 2008 5:40 PM PST
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A tattered rag upon a stick, unless
Buttocks sally forth and cling, and bravely cling
To every blemmish on its scrunched up mess,
Nor is there parping school but studying
Monuments of its own brownificence;
And therefore I have sailed the seas and come
To the holy city of Brownium.
From "Sailing to Brownium" by William Butler Yeats