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Gnarly Knees (Free verse) by Dovina Cut and bruised
kicked in soccer
swollen from track.
Mother worries Iâll never marry.
But I wear my dresses short
to attract the One who will say:
I love you and your knees.
May the four of us grow old together.
Up the ladder:
Couplet
Down the ladder:
Dreams of Nothingness
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Posted: October 8, 2005 12:50 PM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2005 12:50 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0794687 Overall Rank: 6407 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.67
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9-Oct-05/6:14 AM
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With knees like those, you will attract a handsome and rugged man and have many a great out-of-doors "adventures".
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Dovina @ 209.247.222.96
> INTRANSIT
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9-Oct-05/6:18 AM
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Yes, may it all come true. Trouble is my knees are smooth now, having given up all that rough soccer and all. Hiking and biking are still good though.
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Dovina @ 209.247.222.96
> Dovina
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9-Oct-05/6:23 AM
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And I know what you mean by "adventures," you naughty man.
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.116.138
> Dovina
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9-Oct-05/6:26 AM
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couldn't help it. sorry. :)
What if he says "I love you ON your knees"?
Then I will assume he means it in an adoring way, of course.
Maybe he's Jesus.
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