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That Summer (Free verse) by XOXScottishgrlXOX
You moved away, and I thought you were never coming back We were young, and I was sure you would find someone else Of course you did, but you say they meant nothing Every summer you came back to see me I was love at first sight The day that you came back to see me I fell in love all over again You told me you loved me, and I told you I loved you I can't stand not talking to you I really can't stand not seeing you I want to hold you in my arms and kiss your lips Boy, I think we could be together forever Not only are you my boyfriend, but you are my best friend I will never forget that summer, and I will always love you

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6403
Posted: August 7, 2005 6:58 PM PDT; Last modified: August 7, 2005 6:58 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] ALChemy @ 65.188.89.69 | 9-Aug-05/1:46 AM | Reply
I was love at first sight? a little narcissistic don't you think.
[n/a] XOXScottishgrlXOX @ 64.12.117.5 > ALChemy | 9-Aug-05/5:12 AM | Reply
I meant It was love at first sight. I was going to edit it, but I didn't want to lose all my votes!!!!
[10] zodiac @ 86.108.12.51 | 9-Aug-05/2:10 AM | Reply
I predict your life is going to be spectacularly eventful and dramatic, and not in a good way.
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