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Golden Sands (Free verse) by Hadasl
I see the world, as the stars and sun and moon
shine upon my many lands
and though I'll always long for home,
my heart belongs with foreign sands
Beneath the bright Orion's Belt,
I hear the wind and feel the sea
golden sands course through my fingers
as another calls to me
The salt from the sea and sanguine paprika aplenty
mingle with the merchants of the Nile's faithful gift
the pyramids in silence stand as proud archaic sentries
as the Nile flows below me, perpetual and swift
The merry Cancun sun alights the valley of the Maya,
mariachies sing and dance, lighting up the street
the zephyr brings along with it the smell of ripe papaya
as flowers bloom and colors show, dancing with the heat
Now my hands are lined, my hair is gray
to cross the sea I dream away
The rain has fallen, so have our tears
white sands, they steal my golden years
Thus I wheel myself to the archaic sea,
to reacquaint with some old friends,
beneath the shining stars, it comes to me
that heaven's made of golden sands
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Posted: April 5, 2005 11:28 PM PDT; Last modified: April 5, 2005 11:28 PM PDT
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