*snicker*

That giving birth may seriously harm the mother may well give rise to a mind-parp. However is this mind-parp so cosmically profound that the foetus that is killed is not the same foetus that would have been killed had the labour not been so harmful. I can only hope so.

Anapestic is tricky to get It's quite clear you've not mastered it yet. I hope you'd've redacted And were merely distracted 'cuz the newel was making you wet.

On second thought – no.

Sorry to disappoint, but your perception of my repentance is false. Both of my Hunger poems are, in my opinion, not bullshit, but honest commentary on many kinds of hunger and how they intermingle – a hierarchy of hunger. Speaking of intermingling, with so many tadpoles in the pond these days, each belching four pustuled burps before they grow legs or die, perhaps an old cowfrog is a bit of a novelty, wouldn’t you say, Bull?

What I sort[of] try to express is that looks are mostly always what people find. And it ends up being horribly wrong once you get to know the good looking fella who ends up being a retarded dumbass. Make sense? ;) But I wrote this poem with something else in mind that even i couldn't really put in words, sort[of].

Thanks for putting it easy on me. I know the poem sucks but like I said in my the poem "I get up to write poetry but this poem is all I got out of me."