poemranker ::What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR

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What?

Member since 2005 · Posted 4 Mar 2005 · 3 comments

What? You don't like what you see? I don't care, It's me If you don't like what you see, Then don't look This is what I be Look at a hook-er I'm a lot of different stuff; Cool, and nice But no, not puff Just roll the dice I like rock, And Hip-Hop. I sometimes dress punk-ish Others, I am more inside; I change my image to create a new one Just for you To trick you into thinking what I am But to find out that I am not Image isn't everything Learn to find out the person first Don't ever think to change me, 'Cause this is who I be. WHAT?!

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[4] i_am_the_popsicle 5-Mar-05/9:10 AM Reply
uch, no offence but this is terribly terribly cliched, and i dont feel it is all that well written - 4 -
[4] whispern_smoke_wisp 5-Mar-05/9:48 AM Reply
i agree with i_am_the_popsicle
[10] RION12 7-Mar-05/8:12 PM Reply
Dude this was great. I don't think you read me this one but I know what you mean.