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What? (Free verse) by DaRkMoOnLuVeR

What? You don't like what you see? I don't care, It's me If you don't like what you see, Then don't look This is what I be Look at a hook-er I'm a lot of different stuff; Cool, and nice But no, not puff Just roll the dice I like rock, And Hip-Hop. I sometimes dress punk-ish Others, I am more inside; I change my image to create a new one Just for you To trick you into thinking what I am But to find out that I am not Image isn't everything Learn to find out the person first Don't ever think to change me, 'Cause this is who I be. WHAT?!

i_am_the_popsicle 5-Mar-05/9:10 AM
uch, no offence but this is terribly terribly cliched, and i dont feel it is all that well written - 4 -




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