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Do I Know U? (Free verse) by DaRkMoOnLuVeR
Do I know you? I don't think so Am I glue? Or am I a bow? I've never seen you before, Are you new? I sometimes ignore, 'Cause I'm very blue You seem nice I sometimes don't see clear Kind of like ice Sometimes don't hear I really don't care much It seems like I do Like a hunch Like who? Can you see What I'm about to be? I don't even know you, I don't care. I'll see you around Come if you dare.

Up the ladder: The Beatles
Down the ladder: my memories

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.9403987
Overall Rank: 9082
Posted: March 4, 2005 7:48 PM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2005 7:48 PM PST
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[5] crooked_smile @ 205.188.116.135 | 5-Mar-05/8:36 AM | Reply
im not a very big fan of rhyming, and this does sound rather forced to me - 5-
[5] whispern_smoke_wisp @ 205.188.116.135 | 5-Mar-05/9:49 AM | Reply
i agree with crooked_smile
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