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Do I Know U? (Free verse) by DaRkMoOnLuVeR

Do I know you? I don't think so Am I glue? Or am I a bow? I've never seen you before, Are you new? I sometimes ignore, 'Cause I'm very blue You seem nice I sometimes don't see clear Kind of like ice Sometimes don't hear I really don't care much It seems like I do Like a hunch Like who? Can you see What I'm about to be? I don't even know you, I don't care. I'll see you around Come if you dare.

crooked_smile 5-Mar-05/8:36 AM
im not a very big fan of rhyming, and this does sound rather forced to me - 5-




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