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Nothing And Everything (Free verse) by DaRkMoOnLuVeR You've got nothing
I've got everything
Some talk about nothing
Others talk anything
Most act stupid because they are
I know they're going to end up at a bar
Nothing and everything are Us
Don't make a fuss
We made it
We do need it
It makes us of who we are
Different and/or the same
Of which?
No one knows but you;
It's nothing and everything
Up the ladder:
Beneath The Undertow
Down the ladder:
Tabula Rasa
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Posted: March 4, 2005 7:55 PM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2005 7:55 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6755 Comments:
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i_am_the_popsicle @ 205.188.116.135
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5-Mar-05/9:08 AM
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interesting and i like some of the word choice especially at the end, however it often at times seems just a bit forced and im not quite sure i get the purpose of this poem - 6 -
i agree with i_am_the_popsicle - 6 -
For some reason when one person writes the first time the second always follows with I agree with who ever was first. That's stuipd but funny. Who were you talking about in the poem?
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