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Headstone (Free verse) by ayatollahshawn
You "rest in peace" through sepulchre of stone? You lost your life and could not find your home? Passed away as if you were possession? Euphemisms wont cure my obsession! Can't you be dead? Be ravaged by the beast Of father time. Blind by all of the feats Of man unkind? That cancer tore your dreams And made all your nightmares link in with mine? Just say he's dead and that he sleeps no more. Then I'll pick up my soul from dirty whores.

Up the ladder: 9/5
Down the ladder: Derrick Holmes

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6705
Posted: June 22, 2004 1:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2004 1:53 PM PDT
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[8] titan69 @ 62.31.23.167 | 22-Jun-04/2:28 PM | Reply
good poem!!
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