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Foreplay (Free verse) by INTRANSIT Oh how I love to
run my fingers through
your angelic hair
and absorb the sweet
lemon scent of those tresses.
Then, to put you to my lips
and taste your Chardonnay
breath.
And nibble at your
buttery tender young
flesh.
Oh how I wish our
capers could last forever.
You are truly my favorite
Italian dish.
To consume you endlessly
would be sheer gluttony.
Alas,I must say goodbye,
for absence makes the heart
grow fonder.
Up the ladder:
somewhere between alpha and omega
Down the ladder:
Emergency
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Posted: December 22, 2002 3:22 PM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2002 2:35 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.166884 Overall Rank: 4988 Comments:
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wOrnella Mutiw @ 198.81.26.167
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22-Dec-02/3:26 PM
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the pain and sorrow of a truck driver...but hey I thought they were plenty of hookers at Exxon...8
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INTRANSIT @ 65.58.43.190
> wOrnella Mutiw
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22-Dec-02/3:30 PM
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fooled you,I did I did. Thanks.
This is cruel man, not foreplay, you do all that to her then say goodbye -your a bad man I/T, the end kinda works though, and one enjoyed it did one. -7-
Is this some sort of pasta dish you're enjoying? I like it, despite whether I'm correct in my naive assumption.
you're awfully close. there's pasta involved. but what else?
almost there...
Hee hee, excellent poem, love the bit near the end ("To consume you endlessly...") 9/10
typos, oh typos how I would love it if there were no typos.
I saw 'em too. friggin T\S kiosks! Round 'em all up for a revote whilst I don my Letter man costume.
lemon-butter chicken and pasta w/wine, perhaps? o.0
i like this
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Ah...but if you had stayed you could have died fat and happy! I can't post today...but have a fun one for next post...fits this very well...Oh...and, yours is more food oriented than my "To Know You". Alternate ending?>(So call me a glutton, and let me die full within you!)*wink
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