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Foreplay

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Dec 2002 · Edited 23 Dec 2002 · 12 comments

Oh how I love to run my fingers through your angelic hair and absorb the sweet lemon scent of those tresses. Then, to put you to my lips and taste your Chardonnay breath. And nibble at your buttery tender young flesh. Oh how I wish our capers could last forever. You are truly my favorite Italian dish. To consume you endlessly would be sheer gluttony. Alas,I must say goodbye, for absence makes the heart grow fonder.

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12 comments

[8] wOrnella Mutiw 22-Dec-02/3:26 PM Reply

the pain and sorrow of a truck driver...but hey I thought they were plenty of hookers at Exxon...8

[n/a] INTRANSIT › wOrnella Mutiw 22-Dec-02/3:30 PM Reply

fooled you,I did I did. Thanks.

[7] Caducus 23-Dec-02/3:44 AM Reply

This is cruel man, not foreplay, you do all that to her then say goodbye -your a bad man I/T, the end kinda works though, and one enjoyed it did one. -7-

[8] blkarak 23-Dec-02/7:33 AM Reply

Is this some sort of pasta dish you're enjoying? I like it, despite whether I'm correct in my naive assumption.

[n/a] INTRANSIT › blkarak 23-Dec-02/10:17 AM Reply

you're awfully close. there's pasta involved. but what else?

[7] <~> 23-Dec-02/8:16 AM Reply

almost there...

[9] Ranger 23-Dec-02/12:31 PM Reply

Hee hee, excellent poem, love the bit near the end ("To consume you endlessly...") 9/10

[n/a] poetandknowit 23-Dec-02/2:26 PM Reply

typos, oh typos how I would love it if there were no typos.

[n/a] INTRANSIT › poetandknowit 23-Dec-02/2:30 PM Reply

I saw 'em too. friggin T\S kiosks! Round 'em all up for a revote whilst I don my Letter man costume.

[8] Katzclear 23-Nov-03/4:04 PM Reply

lemon-butter chicken and pasta w/wine, perhaps? o.0

[8] dancin_n_da_moonlite 5-Mar-05/11:38 AM Reply

i like this
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[9] LilMsLadyPoet › dancin_n_da_moonlite 2-Sep-05/9:41 AM Reply

Ah...but if you had stayed you could have died fat and happy! I can't post today...but have a fun one for next post...fits this very well...Oh...and, yours is more food oriented than my "To Know You". Alternate ending?>(So call me a glutton, and let me die full within you!)*wink