jessicazee
replying on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee
6 Mar 2005, 10:58 PM
thanks for the ups. I have a new version, the title for now is 'you fell asleep first'...wanted to make it a new one but this site says I have to wait 2_hours_...I might be in my attic drinking whiskey by then...
Must U rite such gay poems allathe time? Do you know that they make lipstick out of suet? "suety gang..."
i like it - 8 -
i hope that the point of this simply went over my head and that it isnt as bad as i think it is
- 5 -
i really like this
thanks - im not so good at spelling (i should probably work on that)
-zarina
thanks!
-zarina
...well, it IS certainly politically incorrect enough to make even me wince as I posted it.
LintyWeenis
on a dialouge between a pessimst and a young child by whispern_smoke_wisp
6 Mar 2005, 3:56 PM
Dialogue between a broken record player and a child perhaps. -you are not a genius-
I know you are but what am I?
Doesn't do it for me. Who knows, maybe I'm missing the point completely. I hope I am.
Goad
replying on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle
6 Mar 2005, 3:54 PM
lol, do you think the above posters are god-fearing conservatives? you should perhaps read their posting history. They are trashing your muddled thinking, not your point of view. Talk about missing the point completely.
I found it funny, am I wrong?
i_am_the_popsicle
on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle
6 Mar 2005, 3:42 PM
its a shame when a group of poets cannot stand a contrarian view, and then on top of it, completely miss the point of a poem
-emyln
thank you so much! i guess this means I have suceeded then(as a poet) if i've made a reader happy!
-zarina
their should be spelled "there", just to let you know.
Also, "loose" should be "lose"
Agreed!
I really enjoyed this poem!!
Why isn't different an adverb?
What do you mean by unsupported? The support is that I have practically the only recognized training on the matter in the entire world.