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RGSsparky replying on This Time Imperfect by RGSsparky 7 Mar 2005, 12:29 PM
correction, i havent tried to pass it off as my own, hence my first comment. DICKHEAD!
Crakyamuni on Beetwen by Dovina 7 Mar 2005, 11:37 AM
Who's that folkish painter in the bronx, a latin man? That guy paints with words sometimes to instill the point that our minds have the amazing ability to organize chaos. I like the the concept at the end. I thnk this is nice.
Jezabele-In-Hell on A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus 7 Mar 2005, 11:09 AM
Excellent. So far the best poem I have ever read!
edpeterson on The Reply by LintyWeenis 7 Mar 2005, 10:56 AM
Can't say I loved the poem, but I cannot give less than a 10 to "LintyWeenis"
edpeterson on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee 7 Mar 2005, 10:53 AM
Liked it better before. The language seemed clearer. The stuff you have added is interesting, but poorly worded, imho.
edpeterson on Beetwen by Dovina 7 Mar 2005, 10:50 AM
metamorphose? Of course, this is bunk, but you know that. Points for different, but then you could use that fucked up font...what the fuck is it called?............Wingdings, and make it completely illegible.
Dovina on The Privaleged by i_am_the_popsicle 7 Mar 2005, 9:09 AM
I didn't get past the first verse due to spelling.
Dovina replying on Fastso by Dovina 7 Mar 2005, 8:49 AM
Funny, most of the ones I know seem jollier than the average person. Poor or not poor seems irrelevant.
Dovina replying on ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad 7 Mar 2005, 8:44 AM
Happy to hear you winced.
Dovina on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee 7 Mar 2005, 8:42 AM
Except for some confusing spacing and "my phone calls are touching," which seems to change the focus, I like it.
richa on Fastso by Dovina 7 Mar 2005, 8:28 AM
I don't think fat people tend to be jolly. I think they tend to be poor and hence have nothing to be jolly about :(
richa replying on Fastso by Dovina 7 Mar 2005, 8:27 AM
Fastso if nothing else deserves an award for the most ironic mispelling ever.
Dovina replying on Fastso by Dovina 7 Mar 2005, 8:13 AM
Q1: edpeterson, as anyone can see. Q2: A hierarchy of hunger is clearly shown in both Hunger poems, call it what you will. Q3: It’s not about hell. Q4: 0.75 +/- 0.20. 0 is clearly incorrect! Q5: The only useful thing you’ve said in weeks. Q6: I declare myself not sexist and not fatist.
Dovina replying on Fastso by Dovina 7 Mar 2005, 8:11 AM
I do apologize for the lipstich with its clearly gay implications for gang members. In the hierarchy of hunger it’s up there with “fatsist” and saying all fat people are not jolly. How do I keep coming up with such nonsense?
zodiac replying on Fastso by Dovina 7 Mar 2005, 5:26 AM
Q1: Who are you talking to? Q2: "a hierarchy of hunger" is still bullshit, and didn't you tell me that wasn't what you were writing about? Q3: What the hell are you talking about? Q4: regarding, "Unlike other fat boys / her linemate isn’t jolly," what would you guess is the proportion of jolly-fat-people-you-know to non-jolly-fat-people-you-know? Mine's practically zero. So what the hell are you talking about? Q5: Did you mean to spell Fatso as "Fastso"? Why? Q6: In addition to being a sexist again, you're also a fatsist now. Is there any depth you won't sink to? I'll bet not.
zodiac on Oh! To be pressed against your windowpane by skaskowski 7 Mar 2005, 5:12 AM
"part of" bothered me. The rest is really quite good.
zodiac on The Reply by LintyWeenis 7 Mar 2005, 5:10 AM
re "What can I say that hasn't already been said?" A lot of things, if you wrote about anything else :-(
zodiac on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee 7 Mar 2005, 5:07 AM
I know a Canadian here whose knobs log me off every time.
zodiac on ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad 7 Mar 2005, 2:13 AM
I don't think you get that in limericks the rhyming words are supposed to be funny ones. Or even just odd ones, like - oh I don't know - 'laser,' 'Negro,' or 'rupture'.
jessicazee on The Privaleged by i_am_the_popsicle 6 Mar 2005, 11:06 PM
spelling problems: priveleged luxury coerced 7.9 regardless