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whispern_smoke_wisp replying on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp 7 Mar 2005, 4:23 PM
thanks :) -zarina
nentwined replying on Sleep does my eyes by nentwined 7 Mar 2005, 4:23 PM
I'm glad it does. I like to find a trickling, bouncing, burbling rhythm in everything. Dance, really. But dance is music. :)
that_funny_girl on Severed by shadowaura 7 Mar 2005, 4:17 PM
i give this a 10 because it is good, but i must ask why you included your age - it doesnt really make any difference at all how old you are - and it just seems to give the impressions that want almost a pity vote, for being younger than the rest of us -nessa
that_funny_girl on nothing could by nentwined 7 Mar 2005, 4:13 PM
intersting...... -nessa
DevilBuni on The Muses by crooked_smile 7 Mar 2005, 4:13 PM
That has to be the longest poem about not being able to write a poem I've ever read.
i_am_the_popsicle on Letter Harmony by webguy 7 Mar 2005, 4:10 PM
i love this - 10 - -emlyn
i_am_the_popsicle on Care by aurora 7 Mar 2005, 4:00 PM
seems more like a pimple poem ...... -emlyn
i_am_the_popsicle on an early discovery (reworking) by richa 7 Mar 2005, 3:59 PM
i like it - 9 - -emlyn
dancin_n_da_moonlite on Doesn't Take Much by Plaidypus 7 Mar 2005, 3:53 PM
absolutely excellent - 10 - -megan
richa on Death is a Three Step Process by dancin_n_da_moonlite 7 Mar 2005, 3:52 PM
sad noess depres sion suic ide. Got ya. Probably a bit ambitious to do an acrostic in this manner and have it make sense.
dancin_n_da_moonlite replying on Death is a Three Step Process by dancin_n_da_moonlite 7 Mar 2005, 3:47 PM
i am afraid you have misunderstood my acrostic includes all the words not just the first of each line
DevilBuni on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp 7 Mar 2005, 3:45 PM
reminds me of a poem I wrote :) Very nice
crooked_smile on The Ode of Human Life by ShaNoN+960317485 7 Mar 2005, 3:44 PM
interesting - 7 - -lia
Dovina on Disfigure by DevilBuni 7 Mar 2005, 3:44 PM
It's far fetched, but with enough truth to consider developing.
crooked_smile on trapoide by Angel_of_fait 7 Mar 2005, 3:41 PM
this i don't feel was all that good - 5 - -lia
Dovina on Pilgrim by richa 7 Mar 2005, 3:41 PM
Snake heaven may have tall golden canes, but virgins for the Pilgrim Puritans? And that last verse with its semicolon and new sentence midway, well, look at the grammar.
crooked_smile on What am I doing? by INTRANSIT 7 Mar 2005, 3:41 PM
this was interesting - and if flowed nicely - 8 - -lia
richa on Death is a Three Step Process by dancin_n_da_moonlite 7 Mar 2005, 2:46 PM
Sudden Death Syndrome. Don't get the rest of it though.
richa on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee 7 Mar 2005, 2:40 PM
Should have kept ethnic studies. This is pretty much prose as well so there was little need for all the flashy effects. Not bad.
INTRANSIT replying on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle 7 Mar 2005, 1:32 PM
One name: Bono. and I aint talkin' Sonny.