Disfigure

Member since 2005 · Posted 7 Mar 2005 · 4 comments

What have you done? How can words disfigure me so? No longer the person I was; I've transformed into you. Each word you spoke cut away A little piece of me; Chiseled into your likeness. It's no longer my face in the mirror. Now, I too disfigure others, Hoping in one I will find myself; Someone who resembles my past. But in each, all I see is you.

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[7] Dovina 7-Mar-05/3:44 PM Reply

It's far fetched, but with enough truth to consider developing.

[10] RION12 7-Mar-05/7:59 PM Reply

I rate you 10.

[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 8-Mar-05/8:47 PM Reply

Good sentiment, but it needs fleshed out. Nice name by the way. -7-

<3 Jason

[n/a] DevilBuni › thepinkbunnyofdoom 9-Mar-05/9:17 AM Reply

What do you mean by fleshed out? Like add more?