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Disfigure (Free verse) by DevilBuni

What have you done? How can words disfigure me so? No longer the person I was; I've transformed into you. Each word you spoke cut away A little piece of me; Chiseled into your likeness. It's no longer my face in the mirror. Now, I too disfigure others, Hoping in one I will find myself; Someone who resembles my past. But in each, all I see is you.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 8-Mar-05/8:47 PM
Good sentiment, but it needs fleshed out. Nice name by the way. -7-

<3 Jason




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