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Ode № 3482

trapoide

by Angel_of_fait

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Jul 2002 · Edited 9 Jul 2002 · 10 comments

Thug Life,people who shrug life, hug life and even sometimes mug life.When the Cat stole your reality everything became a fatetality. so know it comes to my conclusion that things seem like an illousion i'm guessin but not disstressin your reality and unreality to your illousion explains your confusion. Victoria Shanelle Nixon

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[4] nentwined 9-Jul-02/3:02 AM Reply
definitely confusioned. :)

fatality, unless you're punning off of fate? and I don't get "so know it comes" as know or now... they both lose me. illousion doesn't have the first o. and I can't even begin to guess what "trapoide" is.

I'd say this is more freeform than ode.
[5] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-Jul-02/3:56 AM Reply
Beautiful..."people who shrug life, hug life and even sometimes mug life"... sheer genius. You know, people do sometimes mug life. It's an important issue which you have tackled with breathtaking clarity. Are you a pro?
[5] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 10-Jul-02/3:26 PM Reply
I hope, Angel_of_fait, that you weren't trying to pun 'fatality' with 'fate', since they are FROM THE SAME ROOT ANYWAY. However, I think the chance that you were attempting that pun is 1.14%, while the chance that you just have no idea what you're typing half the time is 98.85%. The remaining 0.01% is the chance that you are an inspired troll, far above the rest of us in the hierarchy of irony.
[2] deleted user 10-Jul-02/8:51 PM Reply
this reminds me of rap.
[4] forestchild7 19-Jul-02/6:26 PM Reply
hmmm... I just don't know...
[4] Bachus 31-Jul-02/6:42 PM Reply
Viktoriar spulling is Huh..Imp[ortaint..Ommm.. Okay..Otay
[2] Nicholas Monson 4-Dec-02/4:59 AM Reply
Rap is as valid a format as a sonnet but it has to make sense. What Cat stole my reality? What do you mean by "not distressing your (my?) reality? A generation have fallen in love with the SOUND of words. They get off on alliteration and rhyme but many are guilty of failing to combine it with coherernce and meaning. Go on Victoria, rise up from rap lyrics, write poetry! You have a feeling for it. Go for it!
[n/a] horus8 12-Dec-02/12:41 PM Reply
HA! ^%^^&$^&(*^ HA! ARGHHHHH!
[n/a] poetandknowit › horus8 12-Dec-02/1:39 PM Reply
More Californiaspeak?
[5] crooked_smile 7-Mar-05/3:41 PM Reply
this i don't feel was all that good
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