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trapoide (Ode) by Angel_of_fait

Thug Life,people who shrug life, hug life and even sometimes mug life.When the Cat stole your reality everything became a fatetality. so know it comes to my conclusion that things seem like an illousion i'm guessin but not disstressin your reality and unreality to your illousion explains your confusion. Victoria Shanelle Nixon

nentwined 9-Jul-02/3:02 AM
definitely confusioned. :)

fatality, unless you're punning off of fate? and I don't get "so know it comes" as know or now... they both lose me. illousion doesn't have the first o. and I can't even begin to guess what "trapoide" is.

I'd say this is more freeform than ode.




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