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trapoide (Ode) by Angel_of_fait

Thug Life,people who shrug life, hug life and even sometimes mug life.When the Cat stole your reality everything became a fatetality. so know it comes to my conclusion that things seem like an illousion i'm guessin but not disstressin your reality and unreality to your illousion explains your confusion. Victoria Shanelle Nixon

Nicholas Monson 4-Dec-02/4:59 AM
Rap is as valid a format as a sonnet but it has to make sense. What Cat stole my reality? What do you mean by "not distressing your (my?) reality? A generation have fallen in love with the SOUND of words. They get off on alliteration and rhyme but many are guilty of failing to combine it with coherernce and meaning. Go on Victoria, rise up from rap lyrics, write poetry! You have a feeling for it. Go for it!




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