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His Word (Free verse) by swift_enterprises again and again
Nose to eye
to skin on chin
and then a word
impolite sky over camaro sci-fi driving
patina of welded horizon ahead
mythic proportions from every angle and direction
microbic planet sensibilities
come pumping in again and again
"my my" protagonist muses
sees the wet bruises on banana peel just dropped
stops at the roadside, watches all the traffic cruise by
and knows that soon he must die
his word is "why"
why why why?
Up the ladder:
Remembering is now
Down the ladder:
trapoide
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.6153846
Posted: May 12, 2002 5:48 PM PDT; Last modified: May 12, 2002 5:48 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.987765 Overall Rank: 13392 Comments:
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anonymous @ 204.245.176.100
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17-May-02/9:02 AM
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you know, this is just an idle ramble signifiying nothing. Why don't you write about something that means something... or is that too much of a commitment? Is that too risky?
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