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nothing could (Free verse) by nentwined
nothing could hurt me until I was hurt and nothing could phase me until I was shocked; nothing could stop me

Up the ladder: Twilight Affair
Down the ladder: Give me a goal

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.84375
Weighted score: 6.84207
Overall Rank: 324
Posted: October 20, 2002 11:23 PM PDT; Last modified: October 20, 2002 11:23 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.228 | 21-Oct-02/6:06 AM | Reply
Good! I was worried about you, scared you had'nt seen the light of day for months! HA! you're alive! It is a deep cyberworld indeed. Please do not let it suck the marrow from your being and leave you a hallowed keyboard stroker. 8 for your dead end:)
[8] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 21-Oct-02/6:20 AM | Reply
Cunningly funny
[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 21-Oct-02/8:25 AM | Reply
and then you stopped.
excellent.
[7] Frass @ 66.160.116.193 | 21-Oct-02/11:58 AM | Reply
Had to think about this one. Sounds like 220 volt on that shock.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.96 | 21-Oct-02/5:16 PM | Reply
What could have been so shocking that you lost all forward momentum? O God no -- don't say it! It wasn't... it surely couldn't have been...
[7] that_funny_girl @ 152.163.100.135 | 7-Mar-05/4:13 PM | Reply
intersting......
-nessa
[0] conny lingers @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 7-Feb-21/12:23 PM | Reply
And nothing can stop me from giving this a ZERO!
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