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Death is a Three Step Process (Acrostic) by dancin_n_da_moonlite
silence adds despair (nobody ever sees silence) does everyone's pain receive enough solitude - (sorry, I'm obviously nothing) see - understanding is crucial (I've done enough)

Up the ladder: Breaking Breath
Down the ladder: Free the Stone

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5450
Posted: March 6, 2005 7:34 PM PST; Last modified: January 24, 2006 10:54 AM PST
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Comments:
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.193.41 | 7-Mar-05/2:46 PM | Reply
Sudden Death Syndrome. Don't get the rest of it though.
[n/a] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 152.163.100.195 > richa | 7-Mar-05/3:47 PM | Reply
i am afraid you have misunderstood

my acrostic includes all the words not just the first of each line
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.193.41 | 7-Mar-05/3:52 PM | Reply
sad
noess
depres
sion
suic
ide. Got ya. Probably a bit ambitious to do an acrostic in this manner and have it make sense.
[9] Dan garcia-Black @ 66.218.59.216 | 16-Mar-05/8:19 AM | Reply
Good work on an easy form made difficult (and better}.
[8] deleted user @ 24.12.87.234 | 13-Apr-05/7:47 PM | Reply
Ah, such a downer poem. I wish it were longer, but the form is good. I wish I could make acrostics that were clever...
[n/a] god'swife @ 71.103.98.44 | 26-Jan-06/6:51 PM | Reply
I like the title.
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