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Death is a Three Step Process (Acrostic) by dancin_n_da_moonlite silence adds despair
(nobody ever sees silence)
does everyone's pain receive enough solitude -
(sorry, I'm obviously nothing)
see - understanding is crucial
(I've done enough)
Up the ladder:
A Song Of Waking
Down the ladder:
An alternative to the death penalty
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Posted: March 6, 2005 7:34 PM PST; Last modified: January 24, 2006 10:54 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1422777 Overall Rank: 5484 Comments:
sad
noess depres sion suic ide. Got ya. Probably a bit ambitious to do an acrostic in this manner and have it make sense.
Good work on an easy form made difficult (and better}.
Ah, such a downer poem. I wish it were longer, but the form is good. I wish I could make acrostics that were clever...
I like the title.
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my acrostic includes all the words not just the first of each line