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Free verse № 155217

Ladybirds and Monsters

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Apr 2008 · 2 comments

When I was a child scabs were fun wounds parents were pain wounds, when I was a child coughs brought cloves and cloves brought 'guardians' with dead dreamers books of wolves and damsels tucked in warm linen. When I was a child life was a still as Ladybirds on lifelines yet when they opened their wings a monster stole their spots and I wiped my fear on the mud I know it now as adulthood. When I was a child the moon wasn’t blind to me I saw Robins at Christmas wore hugs like parkers the rain like Calvin Klein’s and the world was a snow globe covered in my fingerprints.

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[8] dvincent 12-May-08/6:48 PM Reply
I don't understand this poem, but I like it. It has a uniqueness and a lyrical quality that makes it stand out from the crowd.

Good work!
[8] dvincent 12-May-08/6:49 PM Reply
Sorry, I forgto to vote.