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An alternative to the death penalty (Free verse) by MacFrantic
would see you placed in an eating contest to an audience of malnourished Ethiopian children and asked to live with yourself.

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5477
Posted: November 2, 2004 6:45 AM PST; Last modified: August 14, 2006 1:51 AM PDT
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[8] Ranger @ 86.131.57.9 | 26-Aug-06/2:55 AM | Reply
Brilliant idea, 'malnourished Ethiopian children' let it down a bit - it's a somewhat cliched phrase whereas the concept itself is very original (to me, anyway).
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