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Disengage (Free verse) by PoetryIsDead
I momentarily disengage
from the struggle of being.
Shrink to an atom and crawl inside myself.
Don my cape and dissect with super vision,
making note of shape and form.
Deconstructing and putting back together
things that are broken.
Adding subtle touches to the me
that could be prettier.
Dancing the curves, retracing lines,
I find the elegance of myself
and I am fascinated.
I smile, and bask in my own glory.
I smile, and engage once more.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5469
Posted: February 24, 2008 11:44 AM PST; Last modified: February 24, 2008 9:44 PM PST
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