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Free verse № 154928

Disengage

Member since 2005 · Posted 24 Feb 2008 · Edited 24 Feb 2008 · 1 comment

I momentarily disengage from the struggle of being. Shrink to an atom and crawl inside myself. Don my cape and dissect with super vision, making note of shape and form. Deconstructing and putting back together things that are broken. Adding subtle touches to the me that could be prettier. Dancing the curves, retracing lines, I find the elegance of myself and I am fascinated. I smile, and bask in my own glory. I smile, and engage once more.

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[8] Edna Sweetlove 25-Feb-08/6:31 PM Reply
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....