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Living Hell (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly
~There's this thing,
that's taken the wheel.
~Has such a tight grip,
that it seems unreal.
~Thrown me in shackles,
and tied me with a rope.
~Put me down in the dungeon,
and diminished all hope.
~How did I get here,
way down in this pit.
~Down with the darkness,
the evil and shit.
~Will I ever reach the light again,
feel the sun on my face?
~Pull myself out of this hell,
escape from this place.
~Defeat the dragon,
break through the window pane.
~Find myself once again,
and get out of the rain.
~But what if it's too strong,
much bigger than me.
~What if it's locked me in it's cell,
and thrown away the key.
~I pray there's a way,
to get away from all this.
~Please Lord help me,
it is my only wish.
~Give me the strength that I need,
more then ever right now.
~Take me in your arms,
and show me how.
~Cause alone I can't do this,
I really need your help.
~I'm so lost and terrified,
this is the worst I've ever felt.
~Please God I beg you,
lead me out of this mess.
~You are my last hope,
the only thing I got left.
*~*March 25th, 2009*~*
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Posted: May 27, 2009 5:32 PM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2009 5:32 PM PDT
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