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Another one for him (Free verse) by hobojo
Pathetic stumble Flat on my face Shattered pieces Without a trace Memories not faded Vivid, and yet Distance created Eyes still wet Patience, and time Hope this will ease Pain and hurt will soon blow Away with the breeze

Up the ladder: honey suckle
Down the ladder: .: night owl (2)

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5471
Posted: November 13, 2008 6:19 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2008 6:19 PM PST
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