Poemranker [Poem: Another one for him] [by hobojo] Thu Nov 21 10:13:39 PST 2024

Another one for him (Free verse) by hobojo

Pathetic stumble Flat on my face Shattered pieces Without a trace Memories not faded Vivid, and yet Distance created Eyes still wet Patience, and time Hope this will ease Pain and hurt will soon blow Away with the breeze

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.1422777
Overall Rank: 5486

Posted: November 13, 2008 6:19 PM PST; Last modified: November 13, 2008 6:19 PM PST
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