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Sleep does my eyes (Free verse) by nentwined sleep dep my eyes rolled (back)
and slammed (back)
down (to forwards...)
dripping water mindfold
wraps around:
a ker-(chief);
a ker-(osene rag)..
.
cold (before it burns).
lucid blankness of passing (time)
fades into
the out of the (into)
and into (time)
passing by;
bye-bye
black sheep
of the counting:
counting sheep the passing (of the mind)
as it (passes
by)
the time (as it fades)
into sleep;
sleep does my eyes, (lids down)
up (down)
UP!
sliding down
without connection:
sleep does my eyes as
the
sleep (dep)
does me...
does me (tucked)
into warm blankets
of muffled
thoughts
of muffled thoughts of...
Up the ladder:
abortion
Down the ladder:
always the end to this good night
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.8108487 Overall Rank: 386 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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ifni @
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
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Why does so much of your poetry sound like music to me?
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nentwined @ 64.60.192.130
> ifni
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7-Mar-05/4:23 PM
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I'm glad it does. I like to find a trickling, bouncing, burbling rhythm in everything. Dance, really. But dance is music. :)
Sounds like some lyrics I have read...They make good money...Could fly...yeah...sure...would like to here the music to it, though...
Shite.
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