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The Pen (Free verse) by whispern_smoke_wisp
The pen touches the page with every intention of writing out a masterpiece. The pen touches the page and hesitatingly attempts a word or two but with no great amount of success. The pen falls on the page and stays that way all day. Sometimes we are not meant to write. Sometimes it is better to live.

Up the ladder: How things should be...
Down the ladder: Silly sickness

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8612
Posted: March 4, 2005 7:00 PM PST; Last modified: March 4, 2005 7:00 PM PST
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[n/a] Plaidypus @ 68.14.27.48 | 6-Mar-05/9:32 AM | Reply
Agreed!
[n/a] whispern_smoke_wisp @ 152.163.100.195 > Plaidypus | 6-Mar-05/4:15 PM | Reply
thanks!
-zarina
[8] DevilBuni @ 149.152.192.18 | 7-Mar-05/3:45 PM | Reply
reminds me of a poem I wrote :) Very nice
[n/a] whispern_smoke_wisp @ 152.163.100.195 > DevilBuni | 7-Mar-05/4:23 PM | Reply
thanks :)
-zarina
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