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Free verse № 121069

The Pen

Member since 2005 · Posted 4 Mar 2005 · 4 comments

The pen touches the page with every intention of writing out a masterpiece. The pen touches the page and hesitatingly attempts a word or two but with no great amount of success. The pen falls on the page and stays that way all day. Sometimes we are not meant to write. Sometimes it is better to live.

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4 comments

[n/a] Plaidypus 6-Mar-05/9:32 AM Reply
Agreed!
[n/a] whispern_smoke_wisp › Plaidypus 6-Mar-05/4:15 PM Reply
thanks!
-zarina
[8] DevilBuni 7-Mar-05/3:45 PM Reply
reminds me of a poem I wrote :) Very nice
[n/a] whispern_smoke_wisp › DevilBuni 7-Mar-05/4:23 PM Reply
thanks :)
-zarina